金榜2009大學聯考英語寫作素材超級資料包

大學聯考英語書面表達分類模板 all the a wonderful weekend we had! 敍事類 We enjoyed ourselves very much. 外出活動、欣賞美景(日記)Through these out-of class activities we can We decided to go out for a picnic. learn a lot of things that can’t be learned I had a pleasant outing with some of my in class. classmates today. Although we were tired, we felt very happy. Early in the morning, we set off for the farm I think it’s our duty to cover our country for a visit. with green. When we reached the farm, we were given a warm 意外事故、天災人禍 welcome. I was walking along the street when a

They showed us around the farm(We were shown terrible accident happened in the street. With the help of the policeman, we found the owner of the bag.

A clever idea came to his mind.

Then he put his idea into practice.

I left the hospital without giving my name. This may be the most unforgettable experience of my life. He felt happy because he had done a good deed. It was not until then that I really understood the meaning of the proverb: “ Helping others is the source of happiness.”

He won the first prize in the physics contest.

He devoted all his life to education. He is loved and respected by us all.

She is considered as one of the best teachers year by year.

With his help, we have made great progress in our studies.

He will always be remembered as a great leader, a wise and warm-hearted man.

He is regarded as a fighter by most of the people in the world.

around the farm) , where we saw many kinds One day something unpleasant plants. The girl fell off her bike and was badly hurt. We caught sight of a stream with green grass Fortunately, the injured people were sent to and beautiful flowers on both sides. hospital without delay.

We were completely amazed at the wonder and An elderly man was hit by a car while he was the greatness of nature.(我們完全被大自然crossing the road. 的奇妙和偉大折服了) He fell down to the ground with a cry. We jumped and shouted like innocent (天真The girl was too frightened to move. 的) children. It was soon found out that the driver had Once on the top of the hill/The moment we got drunk too much wine before driving. to the top of the hill, we were deeply The accident delayed all the traffic for an struck/attracted by the beautiful scenery. hour and caused the damage of $80,000 How we enjoyed the beautiful views from the Lots of people lost their lives in the top ! floods.

After being divided into groups, we set to The big floods, which occurred in 1998, work at once. caused great losses.

Some of us were getting water, some (were) A big fire broke out in an office building cutting the meat and vegetables, and others in a busy street. The cause of the fire has (were) sitting on the grass enjoying music. been unknown. It is being s were singing sweetly in the trees and The fire lasted about two hours and was butterflies were dancing gracefully in the finally put out in the afternoon. garden/fields. As a result, the three-storied building was When lunch time came, we sat on the grassland, destroyed, 50 people were killed, and more eating and drinking happily. than 200 were injured.

The meal was so delicious that we enjoyed it Up to the present, the cause of the accident very much. is still unknown. We sang and danced together to the music. 助人為樂、 捨己救人

Three hours had passed before we knew it. Without thinking about her own safety, she The time passed quickly before we knew it. rushed out and pulled him back. It was time for us to go back when the sun He hurried to school, reaching the started to go down. schoolyard quite out of breath. I spent the whole afternoon with our cousins, She told the teacher what had happened to her enjoying the fine scenery and fresh air in on the way to school. the country. The blind man was out of danger, but she lost At about four o’clock in the afternoon, we her life./got injured. said goodbye to them He was praised for what he had done.

At four o’clock in the afternoon we had to She offered us some gifts, but we refused to return. accept them.

They came out to see us until we disappeared They all thanked him for his help. in the distance. Wondering what to do, Tom saw a policeman. On the way back, we were laughing and talking We hurried to the policeman for help. He will always be remembered as a hero. Miss Zhang is such a good teacher that we all 人物寫照、生平事蹟

love her very much.

He was from a poor peasant’s family. Such was Elbert Einstein, a man of great He is about 1.72 meters in height

the age of 14, he had taught himself 議論文

advanced mathematics.

規勸惡習、見解評説

She is already in her fifties, but she looks Different people have got different younger for her age.

attitudes towards failure.

He is short and thin with a pair of thick Different people have different opinions glasses.

about smoking.

She is tall and slim with big dark eyes and Opinions are divided on the question.

black hair.

60% of the students are against the idea of My English teacher, Miss Zhang, is a entrance fee.

middle-aged woman.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should She often helps those who have difficulty in be charged.

doing their homework.

There are always two aspects(方面) to any With her help, I have caught up with my situation.

classmates.

Everything lives with opposite forces. The At the age of eight he became a member of the same can be said about modern technology, diving team in Guangdong Province. A few such as Internet.

years later, he won a gold medal at the 11th Some (foolish) people seem to

Asian Games and became a world Champion. think/believe/hold the view that smoking isHe has his own way of teaching.

an enjoyment. But in fact, smoking does great He has much knowledge and good at teaching. harm to people’s health.

All these years he has been working hard. We must try to persuade people to give up Many times he has been praised for his smoking.

excellent work.

It is investigated that 30% of the computers He gets on very well with us students. are used to play games.

He is not only our good teacher but also our According to a recent investigation, ??good friend.

Playing games on computers can be a waste of He is honest and always ready to help others. time.

That’s why we made him monitor. It’s been proved that early rising can make We all considered her pronunciation to be the people full of energy.

best of all.

Early rising helps to keep fit.

He is a worthy person for us to learn from. As the English proverb says, “Early to bed He graduated from Qinghua University in and early to rise, make a man healthy, 1982. wealthy and wise.”

An American company wanted to employ him with Experts suggest that people should have high pay, but he refused.

regular sports every day.

He received a doctor’s degree in 1988. Study shows that cigarette smoking can cause He is strict with us and careful in his work. cancers.

In addition to health problems, there are other reasons to give up smoking.

From the above, I come to the conclusion that smoking does great harm to our health. From now on, we ought to break away from the bad habit and form a good one.

Millions of smokers die from illness caused by smoking tobacco.

My suggestions are as follows.

As future builders of our country, we should make full use of our

time to work hard ,and do things to benefit our country.

As we all know, spending too much time on TV may have bad effects on our work and health, especially on our eyes.

Therefore, we should be aware of(注意) when to watch, how to watch, and what to watch. There are many ways of keeping good health. Nowadays, taxies bring people a lot of convenience, but also cause a lot of trouble. Regulations should be laid down for taxi drivers.(應該專門為出租車司機指定交通規則)

Now more and more students are getting near-sighted in schools,

because they have paid little attention to the care of their eyes. 寫作的七項基本原則

一、長短句原則工作還得一張一馳呢，老讓讀者讀長句，累死人！寫一個短小精闢的句子，相反，卻可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主題：As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.

如此可見，長短句結合，抑揚頓挫，豈不爽哉？牢記！

強烈建議：在文章第一段（開頭）用一長一短，且先長後短；在文章主體部分，要先用一個短句解釋主要意思，然後在闡述幾個要點的時候採用先短後長的句羣形式，定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝！文章結尾一般用一長一短就可以了。主題句原則國有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否則會給人造成“羣龍無首”之感！相信各位讀過一些破爛文學，故意把主體隱藏在文章之內，結果造成我們稀裏糊塗！不知所云！所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個主題句，放在文章的開頭（保險型）或者結尾，讓讀者一目瞭然，必會平安無事！

特別提示：隱藏主體句可是要冒險的！To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主題句）. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer allthe questions correctly.

一二三原則領導講話總是第一部分、第一點、第二點、第三點、第二部分、第一點?如此羅嗦。可畢竟還是條理清楚。考官們看文章也必然要通過這些關鍵性的“標籤”來判定你的文章是否結構清楚，條理自然。破解方法很簡單，只要把下面任何一組的詞彙加入到你的幾個要點前就清楚了。

first, second, third, last（不推薦，原因：俗）

firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推薦，原因：俗）

the first, the second, the third, the last（不推薦，原因：俗）

in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推薦，原因：俗） 5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（強烈推薦）

6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（強烈推薦）

7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（強烈推薦）

8）most important of all, moreover, finally 9）on the one hand, on the other hand（適用於兩點的情況）

10）for one thing, for another thing（適用於兩點的情況）

建議：不僅僅在寫作中注意，平時説話的時候也應該條理清楚！短語優先原則

寫作時，尤其是在考試時，如果使用短語，有兩個好處：其一、用短語會使文章增加亮點，如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單，看不到一個自己不認識的短語，必然會看你低一等。相反，如果發現亮點—精彩的短語，那麼你的文章定會得高分了。其二、關鍵時刻思維短路，只有湊字數，怎麼辦？用短語是一個辦法！比如：I cannot bear it.

可以用短語表達：I cannot put up with it.I want it. 可以用短語表達：I am looking forward to it. 這樣字數明顯增加，表達也更準確。

五、多實少虛原則原因很簡單，寫文章還是應該寫一些實際的東西，不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實詞，少用虛詞。我這裏所説的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們説一個很好的時候，不應該之説nice這樣空洞的詞，應該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital之類的形象詞。再比如：When to go, Why he goes away?走出房間，general的詞是：walk out of the room5）附加（多此一舉）但是小偷走出房間應該説：slip out of the room如果有了老婆，總會遇到這樣的情況，當你再講 小姐走出房間應該説：sail out of the room某個人的時候，她會插一句説，我昨天見過他；小孩走出房間應該説：dance out of the room或者説，就是某某某，如果把老婆的話插入到我 老人走出房間應該説：stagger out of the room們的話裏面，那就是定語從句和同位語從句或者 所以多用實詞，少用虛詞，文章將會大放異彩！是插入語。多變句式原則The man whom you met yesterday is a friend 加法（串聯）of mine.

都希望寫下很長的句子，像個老外似的，可就是I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.怕寫錯，怎麼辦，最保險的寫長句的方法就是這Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is 些，可以在任何句子之間加and,但最好是前後的easy-going.句子又先後關係或者並列關係。比如説：其實很簡單，同位語--要解釋的東西刪除後不影I enjoy music and he is fond of playing 響整個句子的構成；定語從句—借用之前的關鍵guitar.詞並且用其重新組成一個句子插入其中，但是如果是二者並列的，我們可以用一個超級句式：whom or that 關鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also 6）排比（排山倒海句）warm.文學作品中最吸引人的地方莫過於此，如果非要其它的短語可以用：讓你的文章更加精彩的話，那麼我希望你引用一 besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover個個的排比句，一個個得對偶句，一個個的不定轉折（拐彎抹角） 式，一個個地詞，一個個的短語，如此表達將會批評某人缺點的時候，我們總習慣先拐彎抹角説使文章有排山倒海之勢！

説他的優點，然後轉入正題，再説缺點，這種方Whether your tastes are modern or

式雖然陰險了點，可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。traditional, sophisticated or simple, there 所以呢，我們説話的時候，只要在要點之前先來is plenty in London for you.

點廢話，注意二者之間用個專這次就夠了。Nowadays, energy can be obtained throughThecar was quite old, yet it was in excellent various sources such as oil, coal, natural , solar heat, the wind and ocean coat was thin, but it was have got to study hard, to enlarge our 更多的短語：scope of knowledge, to realize our

despite that, still, however, nevertheless, potentials and to pay for our life.（氣勢in spite of, despite, notwithstanding因恢宏） 果（so, so, so）要想寫出如此氣勢恢宏的句子非用排比不可！昨天在街上我看到了一個女孩，然後我主動搭挑戰極限原則既然十挑戰極限，必然是比較難訕，然後我們去咖啡廳，然後我們認識了，然後的，但是並非不可攀！

我們成為了朋友?可見，講故事的時候我們總要原理：在學生的文章中，很少發現諸如獨立主格追求先後順序，先什麼，後什麼，所以然後這個的句子，其實也很簡單，只要花上5分鐘的時間詞就變得很常見了。其實這個詞表示的是先後或看看就可以領會，它就是分詞的一種特殊形式，因果關係！分詞要求主語一致，而獨立主格則不然。比如：The snow began to fall, so we went weather being fine, a large number of 更多短語：people went to climb the Western , therefore, consequently, accordingly,Africa is the second largest continent,hence, as a result, for this reason, so thatits size being about three times that of失衡句（頭重腳輕，或者頭輕腳重）China.如果您可一些出這樣的句子，不得高分才有些人腦袋大，身體小，或者有些人腦袋小，身怪！ 三、文章主體段落的三大殺手鐗體大，雖然我們不希望長成這個樣子，可如果真一、舉實例思維短路，舉實例！提出一個的是這樣了，也就必然會吸引別人的注意力。文觀點，舉實例！提出一個方案，舉實例！而且者章中如果出現這樣的句子，就更會讓考官看到你也是我們揭示一個觀點最好的方式，任何情況的句子與眾不同。其實就是主語從句，表語從句，下，只要我們無法繼續文章，不管三七二十一，賓語從句的變形。儘管舉例子！舉例：This is what I can order to attract more customers, Whether he can go with us or not is not rtisers have adopted every possible同樣主語、賓語、表語可以改成如下的複雜成分：simulative factor in making ads, such as

sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to

advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.更多句型：To take?as an example, One example is?, Another exampleis?, for example做比較方法：寫完一個要點，比較與之相似的；又寫完一個要點，再比較與之相反的；世界上沒有同樣的指紋，沒有相同的樹葉，文章亦同，只有通過比較，你才會發現二者的相同點（through comparison）和不同點（through contrast）。下面是一些短語：相似的比較：

in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner相反的比較：

on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead,nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with?,?三、換言之沒話説了，可以換一句話再説，讓你的文章在多一些字，或者文鄒鄒地説，是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點。實際就是重複重複再重複！下面的句子實際上就三個字I love you!I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我們舉過的例子：I cannot bear it.可以用短語表達：I cannot put up with it.因此可以這樣説：I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短語：in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply.

雅思寫作常用單詞----常用的連接詞 常用的連接詞: 1)表層次:

first, firstly to begin with further in the first place

second, secondly to start with still furthermore

third, thirdly what is more last last but not least

also and then next besides

and equally important too moreover besides in addition finally 2)錶轉折； in next year．in daughter？What things are in other homes，by contrast although though yet （3）First，let me tell you somethingmore I wonder．Howat the same time but despite the fact that about myself．more（7）Evening came down．down（注：downeven so （4）We practise for three times every week 為需刪去的詞） in contrast nevertheless even though for all and often watch football match on TV連詞及與並置問題that together．for連詞連接的前後兩部分是否合乎邏輯；並列連詞notwithstanding on the contrary however in （5）Now I can't watch much television，but 所連接的前後兩部分結構是否等同。這兩點是解spite of a few years ago I was used to watch it every 答與連詞及其相關問題的大學聯考英語改錯題的關on the other hand otherwise instead still night．much鍵所在。regardless （6）Whenever I see them I will often think （1）It was very kind of them to meet me at 3)表因果； of my English teacher．oftenthe station and drove me to their therefore consequently because of for the （7）I was so tired that I fell asleep at the home．drive reason moment my head touched the pillow．at（2）Playing football not only makes us grow thus hence due to owing to 5、固定結構（固定句型、固定短語、固定搭配）up tall and strong but also give us a sense so accordingly thanks to on this account 所謂固定結構是指英語中一些不能隨意更改的of fair play and team spirit．gives since as on that account in this way 習慣表達。如固定短語中的詞不能宂缺，固定搭（3）She was smiling but nodding at for as a result as a consequence 配要前後一致等。me．and 4）表讓步： （1）It was very kind for them to meet me at （4）I remembered her words and clam still nevertheless concession granted the railway station and drove me to their down．calmednaturally home．of （5）It looks as if my parents treat me as in spite of all the same of course despite （2）I use to play ping －pong a lot in my a visitor and a guest．or even so after all sparetime，but．．．used （6）The food was expensive and the service 5)表遞近： （3）Some wanted to see the programme while was good．But furthermore moreover likewise what is more others preferred another．one （7）As we climbed the mountain，we fed besides also not also... （4）．．．but the others spent a lot∧time monkeys，visiting temples and told too in addition arguing and ．．．of stories．visited 6)表舉例： （5）When I was on the stage the next day， for example for instance for one thing that I felt so nervous as I shook like a 怎樣的流程？審題——草稿——成文——檢查 is leaf．that第一步，審題。 to illustrate as an illustration a case in （6）Suddenly，I caught a sight of my English拿到題目後，手中拿鉛筆，手腦眼嘴並用，point teacher in the crowd．a（注：a為需刪去開始審題。看題目的要求是什麼，要點是什麼，7)表解釋： 的詞） 特殊要求是什麼。譬如你是叫李華，還是隨便一as a matter of fact frankly speaking in this （7）Like most of my schoolmates，I have 個名字？要議論文還是記敍文？對分幾段寫有case namely neither brothers nor sisters—in any other 無要求？等等。諸如此類的硬性要求信息，都最in other words英語中18大激勵人心的豪情壯words，I am an only child．any（any需好用鉛筆劃下來，以免出錯，也許你一開始會記語 為刪去的詞） 得，可隨着時間的流逝，你會不會因緊張而遺忘8)表總結： 9、易混淆的詞或詞組這些信息呢？還是小心為妙。邊看最好邊張嘴默in summary in a word thus as has been said 易混淆的詞既包括詞意相同或相近的同義詞、近讀，這樣就不會遺漏或忽略任何一個字了。 in brief in conclusion altogether in other 義詞，也包括外形相似、意義有別的詞組。易混第二步，草稿。 words 淆詞或詞組的辨析也是大學聯考改錯題中不容忽視有的同學怕出錯，全文都打草稿再謄寫，我to conclude in fact finally in simpler terms 的部分。姑且認為不太可取，畢竟考場時間寶貴，即使我indeed in short in particular that is （1）．．．but now I am interesting in 有四十分鐘時間寫作文也不敢貿然這麼做，更何in other words of course on the whole to put football．interested況考場時我們留給作文的時間往往一再被壓縮。it differently （2）We must keep in mind that we play for 有的同學不打草稿，我認為更不太可取。一來容namel the team instead∧ourselves．of 易出錯，二來邊寫邊想思維不連貫，即使思維連4、贅述（3）Now I can't watch television，but a few 貫也無法審詞酌句，展現自己最好的一面，容易大學聯考英語改錯題中的贅述是指在一些固定表達years ago I was used to watch it every 後悔。 中或從上下文邏輯來看用了多餘的詞，從而使句night．was（注：was為需刪去的詞）草稿怎麼打，我的做法是，一打結構，二打子表達不合規範或造成邏輯上的重複。（注：帶（4）Unfortunately，there are too many people 關鍵詞，三打句式。 下劃線的詞為多餘的詞，即需刪去的詞）among my family．in1.結構就是你打算分幾段寫，每段都寫什（1）Today I visited the Smiths－my first （5）They did not want me to do any work at 麼？哪段轉哪段承哪段起合？心裏都要是有譜time visit to an American family．timefamily；they want me to．．．home的。 （2）In fact，they are planning to visit China （6）Do they really understand their2.關鍵詞：結構擬定後，迅速在草稿紙上寫

下自己這篇作文可能用到的一些關鍵詞。包括一些漂亮的詞和自己可能會忘記的詞。主要是動詞和名詞。

譬如一省作文題：假設你的名字是李華，亞洲冬季運動會將在你居住的地方舉辦，現招募志願者。你希望成為志願者。申請信的格式已經寫好了，你直接寫內容就可以。你的個人情況：年齡性別學歷，個人條件。英語好，愛好體育，擅長交際，樂於助人。承諾提供最佳服務。關鍵詞就是學歷、愛好、擅長、樂於、承諾，重要評分標準，滿分作文有個共性，就是有效地situation of my own, and what’s more, I am doubt等。例： 使用了語句間的連接成分，為此，學會使用關聯able to better understand the author’s ideas. ①The answer to this problem involves many 詞，是提升書面表達質量的重要策略之一。In a word, to read the original work is better factors. First, . . . Next, . . . Last, . . to see the film based on it. 解決問題的方法涉及兩方面，首先，??其有的同學在作文中使用過多簡單句，成了簡單句 【精彩點擊】 次，??最後，?? 堆砌；有的寫複雜句時，動輒用so， and，then，寫作要求我們就選擇看電影還是讀原著談談看②The following factors account for the but，or，however，yet等非但達不到豐富表達法。作者在做到了要點齊全，內容充實，語言規problem. On the one hand, . . . On the other 方式的目的，反而使句子結構鬆散、呆板。為了範，語法正確的同時，較好地運用句子間的連接hand, . . . 避免這種現象，可以通過使用不同的關聯詞，不詞，從而使文章結構嚴謹，層次分明，邏輯性強。 以下原因導致了這一問題， 一方面， ??另一僅能夠豐富句型，而且還能夠把思想表達得更清①第一段中，besides一詞的使用，多角度説明方面，?? 和你對這篇作文初步構思時想到的一些詞。先把這些詞（指詞的英文表達）寫在紙上。有一些詞的拼寫，譬如學歷，可能你本身就記得不是特別清楚，這時一定要在開始寫作文前先把它寫下來，以免一會因干擾而遺忘。

然後，彆着急，這些詞不一定就是你作文中要用的詞啊。可能看到聰明這個關鍵詞時，你最初寫下的往往是clever，再仔細想想，你是不是又想到了smart,deligient好多詞，挑個漂亮和合適的用吧。再比如轉折，你寫了but，這會再想想，是不是又有一堆表示轉折的詞在你腦裏打轉呢？挑一個吧。千萬別用but.

3.句式：詞寫下來了，其實你構建這篇作文的建築材料就到位了，下步就是要把它們蓋成漂亮的作文。先用最普通的陳述句把它們在頭腦中過一遍，然後看看都能改成什麼句式。能不能把一句陳述句改成問句？能不能用上一個雙重否定句？能不能用一個主語從句套定語從句的長句？能不能用一個插入語？等等。把你高中三年的英語積累展示出來。在草稿紙上同樣標註。三．正式寫。這樣的草稿打完後，就要快快寫了。注意，英語作文的卷面簡直太重要了，一定要把字寫整齊，寫大。沒有把握的詞和句子不用，寧可忍痛割愛也不冒犯錯的風險。別忘了遵守你最初用鉛筆劃下的題目的規定。

四．檢查。注意，最最重要的一步來了。儘管很小心，可是我們寫英語作文還是會犯下很多錯誤。單詞拼寫的，大小寫的，等等。這些錯誤會極大破壞我們在閲卷老師心目中的形象，一定要堅決誓死消滅。即使時間再緊，請務必留下1——2分鐘檢查作文的時間，消除隱性錯誤，避免自殺行為。

需要説明的是，英語的開頭和結尾是最關鍵的，尤其是開頭。基本上，不跑題，遵守題目要求，一個漂亮的開頭，一個還過得去的結尾，2-3個高級詞彙，1-2個漂亮的句子，加上整齊的字跡，作文的分就不會低了哦。所以，精心為你的作文想個漂亮的開頭吧，切記哦：）

大學聯考英語作文增分的“亮點”

文章的連貫性和緊湊感是大學聯考書面表達的一個楚，意義更連貫。 人們選擇看電影的理由； ③As a matter of fact, it is health rather ■ 金題解析 ②第二段中，meanwhile一詞的使用，增強了語than wealth that counts. 當前不少文學作品被改編成電影。有人選擇看電言表達的説服力； 事實上，健康才是最重要。 影，有人則喜歡讀原著。請你以“Film or book, ③第三段中，what’s more一詞的使用，使作者④What is more serious is that we do not which do you prefer?”為題，按照下列要點寫在説明自己觀點時呈現較強的邏輯性和感染力。cherish the wildlife. 一篇英語短文： In a word用於總結前文，突出了主題。 更嚴重的是，我們不珍惜野生動物。 看電影：省時、有趣、易懂 ■ 關聯詞的應用 ⑤In addition, we should not neglect that 2. 讀原著：細節更多、語言優美 文章段落之間的邏輯關係可以用啟、承、轉、合everyone wants a friendly and peaceful 3. 我的看法及理由 來概括。“啟”就是開頭, “承”是承接，“轉”society.【注意】 是轉折，“合”是綜合或總結。 此外，我們不應忽視每個人都想要一個温馨祥和1. 詞數：100~120 文章題目和開頭已給出（不（1）用於“啟”的關聯詞語通常用在段落或文的社會。 計入詞數）。 章的開頭： first, first of all, at first, in （3）用於“轉”的關聯詞語通常用在段落中的2. 參考詞彙： original work 或 book in the the first place, firstly, to begin with, to 第二個擴展句中： but, however, on the other original （原著） start with, recently, now, nowadays, at hand, on the contrary, in contrast, in any Film or book, which do you prefer? present, in recent years, in general, case, at any rate（無論如何）, neverthelessSome of us think that it is better to see the generally speaking, lately, currently等。（雖然如此）, otherwise, or, or else, while, film than to read the book in the original. 例： whereas, but, despite, in spite of ..., yet, 【寫作指導】 ①Nowadays，a heated debate （discussion） instead等。例：

這是一篇提綱式半開放性作文。寫作時，我們既about private cars is under way in China. ①However, this idea is now being questioned 要注意漢語提示的要點，又要準確表達自己的觀時下，人們正議論着關於私家車的話題。 by more and more experts.

點。因此，要分兩段寫出兩種不同的觀點，在最②In the recent few years, millions of fast 這一想法卻受到越來越多的專家質疑。

後一段寫出自己的觀點。大學聯考書面表達新評分標food restaurants have mushroomed all over ②But just as a coin has two sides, tourism 準在語言運用上對同學們提出了更高的要求，即China. inevitably has its disadvantages. 在考查短文語言表達準確性的基礎上，進一步強近幾年，中國湧現上百萬快餐店。 凡事都有兩方面，旅遊不可避免地有其缺陷。 調用詞的得體性、表達方式的多樣性及語言的連③Currently， there is a widespread concern ③Parents complain their children are 貫性。因此，在寫作時，我們一定要儘可能多使over increasing traffic accidents. behaving unreasonably while the children 用高級詞彙和複雜句型，要恰當使用連接詞、過時下，不斷增加的交通事故已引起人們的廣泛關declare their parents to be old-fashioned. 渡詞，這樣的文章才能出採，才能得高分。 注。 父母抱怨孩子行為不端，孩子則認為父母太落【參考範文】 ④First of all， doing exercise every day is 伍。 Some of us think that it is better to see the of the utmost importance in keeping fit. ④In spite of these changes, the liberation film than to read the book in the original. 首先，每日鍛鍊對保持健康至關重要。 of women has not been completed realized. The reason is that it takes less time to ⑤Generally speaking， the more you 儘管有些變化，婦女解放仍未完全實現。 understand the whole story. Besides, the practice， the more skillfully you can write ⑤On the other hand, some examinations fail film is usually more interesting, and it is in English. to measure how the students have really easier to follow. 一般來説，多實踐，英語的寫作能力就越強。 studied. Some others have just the opposite opinion. （2）用於“承”的關聯詞語通常用在段落中的相反，有些考試卻難以真正衡量學生學識。 They think that they can get more detailed 第一個擴展句中： second, similarly, in （4）用於“合”的關聯詞語通常用在段落的結information from the original. Meanwhile, addition, besides, then, furthermore, 論句或文章的結論段中：in a word, in general, the language in the book is possibly more moreover, what is more, what is worse, for in short, above all, after all, generally lively and beautiful. example, for instance, certainly, surely, speaking，to sum up, finally, in conclusion, Personally, I agree with the second view. obviously, in other words, especially, at last, in summary, therefore, as a result, Actually I have more reasons for it. I think particularly, in particular, indeed, still, above all, thus，after all, eventually, hence, I can stay at home, reading quietly in a third, truly, in fact, at the same time, no in sum（總之）, on the whole（就整體而言）,

to sum up等。例：

①Last but no least, the shortcoming in education is the cause contributing to juvenile delinquency.

最後，但並非最不重要，教育上的缺失是助長青少年犯罪的原因。

②For these reasons, we can conclude that receiving college education is wise.

基於這些原因，我們可以得出結論：接受大學教育是明智的。

③Therefore，it takes longer time and more energy to communicate in written English than in oral English.

因此，書面語交流比口語需要更多時間和精力。 ④In short， environmental pollution is the major problem to be solved to make our world a better place in which to live.

總之，要想生活安逸，必須解決環境污染問題。 ⑤From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society.

通過以上討論，我們可以得出結論：自行車的優點遠大於缺點，並且在現代社會它仍將發揮重要作用。

大學聯考英語作文精彩短語150條

1 欣賞大自然的風景 to appreciate the scenery of nature

2 培養公德心 to cultivate the public mindedness

3 維護健康 to maintain health

4 保護環境 to protect the environment5 開拓視野 to broaden the horizon6 開拓心胸 to broaden the mind7 調劑生活 to make life pleasant8 鬆散身心 to relax oneself

9 啟迪心靈 to enlighten the mind10 灌輸知識 to impart knowledge into someone

11 追求理想 to seek after the ideal12 實現抱負 to realize one's ambition13 守信用 to keep one's promise

14 跟上時代 to keep up with the times15 欣賞古典文學 to appreciate the classical literature

16 學習吉他 to learn guitar17 陶冶品德 to cultivate the character

18 貢獻國家 to contribute oneself to the country

19 鍛鍊身體 to strengthen, exercise the body

20 缺乏休閒活動 to lack recreations21 作筆記 to take notes

22 使用參考書 to use reference books23 關心社會 to be concerned about the society

24 服從校規 to follow the rules of the school

25 盡身為學生的責任 to fulfill one's duty as a student

26 克服困難 to overcome the difficulty

27 面臨困難 to be confronted with the difficulty

28 渡過困境 to weather the storm29 走快捷方式 to cut the corner30 量脈搏 to feel the pulse

31 開藥方 to prescribe the medicine32 堅守原則 to stick to the principle33 注意衞生 to emphasize the importance of hygiene

34 亂丟垃圾 to litter; to scatter garbage

35 美化環境 to beautify the environment

36 種植樹木 to grow trees

37 防止污染 to prevent the pollution38 提升生活質量 to promote the qualities of life

39 造成損害 to do damage to40 對．．．有益 to benefit; to be beneficial to41 對．．．有害 to be harmful to; to do harm to

42 任意停車 to park the car at random43 製造噪音 to make noises

44 佔用人行道 to occupy the sidewalk45 妨礙交通 to hinder the traffic46 排放污煙、廢氣 to belch smoke, exhaust, fume

47 造成不便 to cause inconvenience48 造成混亂 to bring about the disorder

49 闖紅燈 to run through the red light50 利用天橋 to make use of the overpass

51 查字典 to consult the dictionary52 屏息 to hold one's breath53 流淚 to shed tears

54 符合需要 to meet the demand55 生根 to take root

56 產生結果 to bear fruit57 打破沉默 to break the ice58 氣餒 to lose heart; to get discouraged

59 振作 to pull oneself together; to take heart

60 採取步驟 to take steps; to take measures

61 緩和悲傷 to ease ( alleviate ) the sorrow

62 承受負擔 to bear the responsibility

63 考慮到 to make allowance for

64 把握機會 to seize the opportunity65 跑腿 to run an errand

66 樹立楷模 to set a good example67 接受教育 to receive education68 提升生活的水平 to raise the standard of living

69 告辭 to take one's leave70 有很深的瞭解 to have a deep understanding of

71 跟隨流行 to follow the fashion72 提錢 to withdraw money73 存錢 to deposit money

74 良心不安 the conscience stirs75 自立 to be independent; to stand on one's own

76 英文很好 to have a good command of English

77 有廣泛的知識 to have a wide range of knowledge

78 喜愛藝術 to have a great liking for arts

79 扮演重要角色 to play an important role in

80 聊天 to have a chat with81 有．．．才能 to have a talent for82 選擇 to make a choice

83 有很大的影響 to have a great influence on84 予人．．．很深的印象 to make a deep impression on

85 愚弄 to make a fool of86 找藉口 to make an excuse

87 給人搭便車 to give one a lift88 打電話 to give someone a ring89 冒險 to take chances

90 懷恨 to bear grudge against someone

91 牢記在心 to bear mind92 板着臉 to pull a long face93 對．．．充耳不聞 to turn a deaf ear to

94 被開除 to be dismissed from school95 生氣 to be angry with ( at )96 負擔責任 to assume the responsibility

97 符合需要 to serve the purpose98 變胖 to gain weight99 有道理 to make sense100 記日記 to keep a diary

101 盡己所能 to do what one can

102 擅長網球 to be at home in tennis103 郊遊 to go on an outing104 消磨時間 to kill time

105 增加生活的情趣 to increase the pleasures of life

106 精神抖擻 to be ( feel ) refreshed107 解除緊張和焦慮 to relieve the tension and anxiety

108 宣泄久積的情緒 to release the pent-up feelings

109 遊手好閒 to fool around110 準備考試 to prepare for the examination

111 參加課外活動 to take part in the club activities

112 無精打采的 to be listless113 精力充沛的 to be vigorous, energetic

114 防颱 to guard against the typhoon115 逃避現實 to escape the reality116 達到目標 to achieve the aim

117 五育並重 to lay equal emphasis on the Five Disciplines

118 感到無聊 to feel ( be ) bored119 感到剌激 to be excited

120 感到滿意 to be pleased, satisfied121 感到失望 to be disappointed122 感到振奮 to be encouraged, inspired

123 感到氣餒 to be discouraged, frustrated

124 感到疲倦的 to be exhausted125 感到煩惱 to be worried, upset, disturbed, bothered

126 放棄理想 to abandon the ideal127 奠定基礎 to lay the foundation128 失去耐心 to lose patience129 進步 to make progress

130 失去連絡 to lose track of

131 保持連絡 to keep in touch with132 誤入歧途 to go astray133 養成．．．的習慣 to make it a rule to; to cultivate the habit

134 統一中國 to reunify China

135 不辭辛勞 to take the pains to

136 遇到交通阻塞 to be caught in a traffic jam137 給．．．教訓 to teach someone a lesson

138 改過自新 to turn over a new leaf139 引以為樂 to take delight in140 予．．．以打擊 to deal a heavy blow to

141 予．．．以威脅 to pose a threat to142 取代 to take the place of

143 預作保留 to make the reservation144 使．．．澈夜未眠 to cost someone a sleepless night

145 充滿喜悦 to be filled with joy146 背誦 to heart147 鼓勵 to encourage, inspire148 產生不同 to make a great difference

149 犯法 to violate the law

150 不遺餘力 to spare no efforts to