作文要點詞彙

1、長短句交叉;

2、使用插入語;

3、用詞是否多樣、準確、形象儘量使用能夠吸引閲卷老師眼球的閃光詞;

4、關鍵詞是否換用切勿老用重複詞;

5、句型使用是否準確、地道。

下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項

1.適當用被動替換主動這樣能更客觀地反映事實。句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )

舉個經典結尾的例子It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing soits competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

2.善於使用插入語比如説把副詞、連接詞等作為插入語放在中間一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞後兩邊分別加上逗號。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間一般放在動詞、助動詞後兩邊分別加上逗號。舉例如下 Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?

3.一定要學會換詞換形象具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現good, bad , many, thing, think, people,

opinion 等等)比如第一條的例子中applicable替換proper; approaches替換ways;implement替換carry out;

sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)。

下面舉一篇某位同學寫的優秀作文的例子看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法精彩替換和句型都用上了作文有了很大的提高。I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

exceedingly 替換 very;(個人認為替換成overwhelmingly更出彩)

thrilling 替換 exciting;

sth. exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb. be interested in sth;

google 替換 search;

an army of 替換 a lot of。

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型用來描述在某個時期發生了什麼事情;

Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular;

Coincident with ? 非常地道的句型表達“與?一致”的意思替換 With ?;

Advancement 替換 development;

Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替換 enter into;

Current ( currently )替換 now;

Appeal to sb. 替換 sb. be interested in sth.;

Growing individuals 替換 more and more people;

It is no exaggeration to say 經典句型 説某事是毫不誇張的。(it goes wthout exaggeration that更好)For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.

For a start 替換 To begin with;

We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法;

our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被動;

Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides;

Deliver 替換 send。

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way,especially the growing violence ,porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to e is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,

這個句子有三個精彩之處

首先There is no denying that這個句型;

其次however作為插入語;

再次function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to。

Emerging 替換 appearing ( fading 替換 disappearing );

Net citizen 網民屬於精彩用詞。(直接用 netizen更好)

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.

No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides;

Computers do play 使用do 表示強調;

Positive 替換 important / good 等;

A slice of 替換 a part of;

Unfavorable 替換 bad;

Impacts 替換 effects / influences;

We should, therefore, take advantage of ? 使用插入語;

Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象

merits/ virtues) 替換 advantage ( defects 替換 disadvantage ) ;

Facet 替換 aspect。

以下是45個最經典的替換詞各位同學可以參考一下:

31. next to / virtually impossible替換nearly / almost impossible.

rding/concerning 替換about.

ial/paramount 替換important.

35. assiduous替換hard-working

36. arduous替換difficult

rdeveloped/financially-challenged 替換poor(因為poor通常含有貶義)

38. demonstrate /manifest 替換show

39. invariably 替換always

40. perilous/hazardous替換dangerous(寫社會類作文時常用説什麼社會現象是不好的有害的)

41. formidable 替換difficult

42. quintessential 替換typical(舉例時常用例如a quintessential example should be cited that=for example; for instance)

43. distinguished 替換famous

44. feasible替換possible

45. consequently, accordingly替換so

作文同義替換詞以及最新的2013年考研信息希望對各位考生有所幫助。

動詞(詞組)1. absorb->assimilate 吸收

agree partly->agree with reserve 有保留地贊同

arouse->ignite/stimulate/spur/motivate 引起;鼓勵

devote to->dedicate to 把??奉獻於;專注於

emphasize->accentuate 強調

expect->anticipate 期望;預期

get into chaos->with chaos ensuing 陷入混亂

hand in->render 提出

limit->stress/hinder/hamper 限制;阻止;阻礙

operate->manipulate 操作;操縱

publicize->propagandize 宣傳公佈繁榮(的)(詞性不同注意使用正確形式)

sway->vacillate 影響;搖擺使搖擺

think->contemplate/muse/meditate/retrospect 思考考慮

thrive->palmy(a.)/flourishing(v./a.)/prosperity(n.)

undermine->sap/enervate/debilitate 破壞;使衰弱衰竭

use->utilize 使用;利用

2. 形容詞/副詞

hurt->vulnerable 受傷的;易受攻擊的

inevitable-indispensable 必然的;不可缺少的

in fact->actually/virtually 事實上;實際上(ad.)

key->crucial/vital/consequential 關鍵的;重要的

large->miraculous/marvelous 大的;不可思議的(表程度)

obvious->conspicuous 明顯的;顯著的

proper->apposite 適當的;合適的

persuasive->thorough/sound/specific/convincing 有説服力的

true->accurate 正確的;準確的

vague->gratuitous/unwarranted/oversimplified 模糊的

3. 名詞(詞組)

bias->prejudice/discriminate 偏見;歧視

character->trait/individuality/idiosyncrasy/personality 品質;特性;個性child->juvenile 孩子;青少年

clash->conflict/collision/rencounter 衝突

custom->convention/tradition 傳統;習俗

delegate->representative 代表

detail->specific 細節

lawmaking->legislation 立法

offspring->descendant 後代;子孫

value->merit 價值4. 其他

although->albeit/notwithstanding 儘管(conj.)

but->nonetheless/nevertheless 然而;但是(conj.)

through->in term of/via 通過(prep.)

physical health 生理健康

mental fitness 心理健康

keep optimistic保持樂觀

pessimistic 悲觀的

commit suicide 自殺

do physical exercises 進行體育鍛煉

junk food 垃圾食品

well-balanced diet 均衡飲食

infectious diseases 傳染病

despise 輕視，鄙視

anxiety 焦慮；渴望；掛念

disturbed 擾亂的

envious 嫉妒

admire 欽佩

esteem 尊重

grieved 傷心的

impatient 沒有耐心的

courteous 禮貌

diligent 勤奮

generation gap 代溝

the old/aged/elders/elderly, senior citizens 老年人

independence 獨立

doting care 溺 愛

spoil 溺 愛

persistence 堅 持

success 成 功

Achievement 成就 成功

conquer 征服

surmount 克服，越過；戰勝

triumph 勝利

acquire 獲得

attainment 成就

innovation 創新

striving spirit 奮鬥精神

spirit 拼搏精神

striving spirit 奮鬥精神

spirit 拼搏精神

determined

outlook of life 人生觀

difficulty 困難

challenge挑戰

confidence 信心

crisis 危機

employment 就業

cooperation/teamwork 合作

team spirit 團隊精神

pursue 追求

satisfy 滿足

thirsty for 渴望

yearn for 渴望

bravery勇氣

indulge 放任，縱容

inspire 鼓舞

stimulate 激勵

tolerate 容忍

contaminate 污染

environmental protection 環境保護

keep ecological balance 保持生態平衡

sustainable development strategy 可持續發展戰略 save the energy 節約能源（節能）

reduce the emission of greenhouse gases 減少温室氣體排放（減排） greenhouse effect 温室效應

clean renewable energy 清潔可再生能源

low carbon economy 低碳經濟

disaster 災難

catastrophe 災難

deforestation 濫 砍 濫 伐

desertification 沙 漠 化

water and soil erosion 水土流失

sandstorm 沙 塵 暴

snowstorm 雪 災

typhoon 台 風

flood 洪 水

earthquake 地震

責任：duty/responsibility

shoulder/assume/undertake責任感

sense of responsibility義務與責任

逃避：avoid/shun/shirk

奉獻：devote/devotion/dedicate/dedication

職業道德：professional ethics

欺詐行為：dishonest behaviors

偽劣產品：fake commodities

虐待：abuse

錯誤 mistreat, maltreat, ill-treat(ment)

贍養：do good to, care, look after, take care of, financially support

轉趨勢：reverse the trend

cultural exchange 文化交流

cultural integration/blending 文化融合

multi-culture, mosaic culture, pluralistic culture 多元文化

preserve and cherish 保存珍惜

absorb its essence 取 其 精 華

Cross-cultural 跨 文 化 的

cultural differences 文化差異

diversity 多樣性

tradition 傳統

treasure 財富

civilization 文明

mainstream 主流

diploma 學歷 學位證書

去其糟粕：resist its dark side

偶像崇拜：idol worship

學術抄襲：academic plagiarism

上網成癮：web addiction

數碼產品：digital products 電子遊戲：electronic games

手機入網：mobile-phone subscription 手機短信：text message

電子媒體: electronic media

大 眾 媒 體 : mass media

流 行 文 化 ： popular culture 反智主義: anti-intellectualism